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Wirt And Greg

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An experiment with colors and lighting *U* And a fanart of Wirt, Greg, Beatrice and Wirt Jr. lol
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Hello, thought I would write you a little critique as you asked. These are just my opinions feel free to ignore them.

First of all I really want to say how much I like this. This is one of my favourite shows and seeing this makes me happy.

In terms of technique, the are some really nice things here and a few bits you could work on in the future.

I think you did a really good job. You captured the spirit of the show nicely. The soft colours and shading work really well. The characters are cute and simply drawn but striking. I love how you shaded their hair and faces in particular.

Things you could work on in future (bear in mind these are just opinion).
Your line work it a little wobbly in places. That might be intended on your part though its a little distracting in places. Mostly Beatrice's head being slightly out of shape.

I also think the background could be improved. Its very nicely done but it may benefit from some rougher textures and sharper lines. The Beast was such a sinister character, it would be cool to see him a little more menacing. The contrast between that and the softer characters would nicely recreate the cute but dark feeling the show gives you.

I hope some of this was helpful. Again I really love this piece its wonderful.