Daddieyo | Gaster Gijinka

Hi there! I'm from ProjectComment, always willing to help!

My first vision, not even going to lie, was "My, what a bishie!" Wouldn't mind him stepping up to my front door, especially with instant noodles. That's just a win/win!

Anyways, this image is quite pleasing to look at; Beautiful artwork, neat streaks, faultless shading and lighting, and a very pleasing bishie! But, hey, always room to improve ( :

I'll first off start with shading: As nice as it is, some things do catch me off-guard. The part beneath the subject's chin is quite dark compared to the skin; As it should be darker due to it being in shadows, I do believe it is a bit too dark, especially compared to the other shadowing on the skin, especially since it is just that small part of the neck. The next section is the tux. Now, I don't know the proper name of these things, so I am just going to call them 'flap flaps' - The flaps of the suit going along the torso. The ends / tips of them are very dark with shading. I think rather the shading should be UNDER them, as it doesn't seem like there should be anything casting a shadow over the top of them, or at least for the whole section.

Also, the other thing that is bothering me in the Instant Noodles. I know, how can such a nice thing seem to bother. . . But, for me, it is the way it is being held; It doesn't look like it is being held! Rather, it seems to be floating there in way of the hand. Perhaps add the fingers atop it, as they are already in a clutched position.