Akiana |COMMISSION

Hi again, I'm Vern and I am from Project Comment <img class="avatar group" width="100" height="50" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/p/r/p…" alt="" title="ProjectComment" /> and I am critiquing your artwork for More Exposure #27 3wyl.deviantart.com/journal/Mo…
Here is your critique.
Overview - We have a masked woman with horns. The color scheme is purple and blue. I chose to critique this artwork becauseI like Dangaso's art. We really have got to stop meeting like this. This is my least favorite of your artworks.

Akiana:
Hair - The hair is okay but it looks too clumpy. I like the color and I like the way it is shaded and highlighted. I expect great things from you because you are a great artist. Oh well, we can't be great all the time.
Face - There is something wrong with the face and mask. I can't put my finger on it because I am not as good an artist as you. I think it may be the eyes the pupils aren't aligned but they seem okay. Something looks to be off and I can't finger it. I am sorry, I am critiquing you and I am not doing a very good job of this.
Hands - The hand looks blocky and the knuckles are square instead of rounded, one knuckle even looks concave. The highlights look okay.
White Spots - I think this is related to her power and they are just fine.
Clothes - The clothes look just fine and are what I've come to expect from you.

Conclusion - This is a good painting, however, it has flaws and it is not your best work. I look forward to seeing your artwork again. As usual, it has been a pleasure critiquing you and have a great day.