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I love you Kizuna-Ai AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

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here is your critique.

Overview - This is drawn in an anime style. It looks like you are experimenting with different styles. We have a cute school girl in a Japanese sailor suit uniform. She has a smile on her face and looks happy. I chose to critique this because I know you and this is a different style of yours. Also, she is very cute.

Girl:
The girl is in proportion for a chibi Anime character.
Hair- The hair is well drawn and highlighted and shaded. I just love the pink strands of hair that show through. The bow in her hair is really well done and looks very cute on her. The eyebrows look like they are covered by hair. Good job.
Eyes - The eyes are okay. The pupils could be dark with highlights. The eyes don't have any eyelashes. vStill, the eyes are very cute.
Clothes - They look good and they look worn. Good job. The feet look too pointed.

Overall - This is a very good picture and the girl looks chibi. It was a joy critiquing you and I look to seeing more from you. Have a great day.